(b)改写后(较佳)：if my application has convinced you of my ability to satisfy you,i should welcome the opportunity to talk with you,so that you may judge my personal qualifications further.
2、(a)怀疑，不妥、不安全的：if you're interested,let me know immediately,as i'm sure and interview will convince you i'm the man for the job.倘贵公司有兴趣，请即告知，敝人深信与您面谈可以使您相信，敝人适合担任此职。
(b)改写后：may ihave an interview?you can reach me by telephone at taipei 884525 between the hours of 5：30-9： evening.可否赐予面谈?您可在每天上午七至九时，下午五时半至九时电884525号。
3、陈腐的句子：hoping you will give me an interview,i am…(我希望您惠予面谈)anticipating afavorable decision,i wait your…(等候您的佳音)trusting your reply will be satisfactory,i remain(静候满意的答复)
4、哀求式的句子，不够完整(漏掉面谈时间)：won't you please give me the chance to interview your?i can be reached by calling kenmore 69781.恳请惠予面谈。请打电话k-69781
(b)改写后：may ihave the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you?my telephone is kenmore can reach me between nine and five o'clock during the day.可否惠予面谈以便进一步商讨?我的电话是k-69781。我从上午九时到下午五时都可接通。
5、太过自信的句子：i am quite certain that an interview will substantiate my statements between two and four every afternoon except tuesday you can reach me by telephoning 731430.我深信面谈可以证实我的话。您可在每天下午二至四时(星期二例外)打731430号电话通知我。
6、较具体有效的句子。may ihave an interview?my residence telephone is(042) reach me by calling that number until june r july 2,my address will be kent house,bretton woods,new hampshire.可否惠予面谈?我住处电话为43981号。六月三十日以前我都在上址，七月二日以后，我的新址为新罕不夏州布列登林肯特屋。